Thursday, 28 May 2009

When We Fall












4 comments:

poetrytutor said...

WOnderful concrete poem.

It's simplicity itself but gorgeous and I really appreciate with your work that every word is always there for a reason. The cider for example with it's connotations of apples and the whole idea of the fall it all works so beautifully.

Thankyou mr Nash as long as you're writing I know that there is still hope for poetry and at least I have something to look forward to

k.rox said...

Ace.

Visual poetry usually irritates the crap out of me but I like the simplicity of this one and the flow of it is gorgeous. well done x

miltonicaaargghh said...

Very cool x

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